When the sun comes out ...
There was a villain called Windy John. He likes to be mean to the sun. Windy John love eating fish. The sun said “Stay away from me Windy John.”
“Windy John PLEASE don’t do this. Please don’t destroy my kids that want to keep warm.” “But but” said Windy John. “But no buts” said the sun. “Ok I’ll be nice to the kids.”
They lived happily ever afterJ
BY ZOE
To Zoe,
ReplyDeleteI like how you have described a bit about your main character Windy John and how you have used speech marks in your writing to create dialogue. Next time it is only 100 words so you might not get the whole story written in 100 words. I would have liked to know a bit more detail about what changed the sun's mind and why he choose to be nice to Windy John's kids.
From Mrs Head
Dear Mrs Head
ReplyDeleteThank you for that lovely comment. I'll us some more detail.
From zoe :)