Thursday, August 28, 2014

My monster story

Me and Jade, Manaia and Adelei. Was making a story named there's a monster under my bed! Our story is long so you can read then comment what was your favourite part.
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  1. Powerful Learners in Room 7!August 28, 2014 at 10:28 AM

    To Zoe
    I like your story
    What went well for you?
    I especially like all the descriptive words it painted a picture in my mind.
    From Tegan

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  2. Powerful Learners in Room 7!August 28, 2014 at 10:29 AM

    To Zoe
    I really like your monster story i like your wow words.
    What will you do different next time?
    From Anthony

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